This is my thoughts on when and where should be put in. The invention of love.
" She enters the garden centre, nothing living, everything mechanical she is really surprised as were she came from almost everything was alive. She sat on a bench but something very surprising happened (perhaps for her but not for everyone else as they are use to it) a small branch almost fell of, she thought why on earth did nothing else fall off? It was a mechanical tree, she then ran back to her lovely husband but another surprise awaited her. To her dismay when she came home that his husband had thrown away the rose and replaced it with a mechanical flower she raced down to find the rose and find she did but when she blew the dust off her illness came to her and sadly she died. The man was distraught to hear the news when the doctor confirmed that she had died, He threw the mechanical rose away and thrashed his inventions on to the wall so the broke and was sad for the rest of his life but then one day he mad a woman who wasn't anywhere near as good as his previous wife and was sad again.
The man sitting and playing on his piano has a flashback and a very sad one at that. His wife comes ( in his flashback, obviously ) whilst they are both playing on the piano. His best friend and him are in the war now and unfortunately his best friend dies and he tries and tries again to fix him but it is no use. He gets a horse and rides on it and he gives it as a present to his grandson and his grandson then comes and plays with his grandfather and then it is the end.
For the film called ' Invention of love ' from the scene where the woman goes to the town, I would add some speech,but not a lot. The woman could maybe sing,while going there. When there is the part where she sees the dog she could say something like " Come here doggie. Look I have some thing for you." when the clockwise dog comes out she could make some surprised noises. When she still goes in the city she is very quiet,but she coughs. When she comes to the park she says " Yes finally I found the park. I am going for a walk to stop thinking about this." she sites down on the bench and suddenly the branch breaks. "Oh no! What had happened?" she says and tries to lift it up but then she realizes that it is mechanical to. " This is all just a bad dream! Just a bad dream!!!" she yells and runs home. When the man sees that the rose is dead or dried he asks the rose "What had happened? Oh we don't need a dead rose at home it makes us sad. Sorry bye." and drops it out of the window. When the lady sees the mechanical rose she starts crying and runs down the stares.She sits next to the rose and says. "No please no." and she start coughing. " Bye bye." she says and these are her last words. When the doctor comes he says " I am sorry for you." Marketa
As the women realises the flower was throw out the window she dashes down the stairs losing her hat and searches through the dump of rubish... Then she finds it and blowes the dust off it she starts coughing and DIES!
THE PIANO As he goes to help his friend in battle ,with his medic bag and uniform, he stands side by side with his friend. Then the medics friend jumps in to battle and get shot down DEAD!!!
wife:Wow the air is so fresh. narrator: then she saw the mechnical dog. wife: oh what did the people do to you poor thing. wife :oh what happend to you flowers. narrator: she was so sad. Then she saw the butterfly that was also mechanical and she was even more unhappier. wife: oohhhh who could've done this to you? narrator: Meanwhile she was out the man thougt that it is stupid to have living things. man: Let me throw the rose away and make a mechanical one. narrator:The woman comes and says......... wife: It was horrible out there atleast it's better out here.Oh my god..............!!!!!!!! wife :who threw my rose away. man:I did wife :what!!!!!!!!!!! narrator:she ran to get it but when she found it she did a big cough and colapsed.so then the man took her to the doctor and he said...... doctor:I am so sorry to say this but your wife is dead. narrator:In a while the man went home with anger and sadness. man:I knew I should've made sure she won't cough. narrator: However he came up with a idea that he will make a mechanical lady and that was the end. By:Aika
I believe that in the piano this would be my dialouge in a script:
Old Man: Why did my wife have to die...
Dead Wife: Hello gorgious... (fades away)
Old Man: And why did those eveil soldiers slaughter my best friend...
Younger Old Man: Attack... NOW!
Best Friend: Charge!
Younger Old Man: NO! (sees best friend being shot)
Old Man: But I musn't think of my life as a bad life... getting my toy horse as a little boy...
Mum: Now, Here is your present...
Little Boy Old Man: Thank you so much (unwrapping a wooden box)
Old Man's Grandson: Hello Granpa.
Old Man: Hello Grandson...
This is what I believe should be the dialouge for the invension of love, where she goe on a walk.
Woman: Goodbye, Darling.
Inventer: Bye.
Woman: My gosh, what a busy place.
Clockwork Dog: Bark, Bark!
Woman: Come here little doggy, come... (dog steps forward and reviels tat it is clockwork, woman ghasp's) Well, this isn't such a jolly place after all... (sits down on a bench)Oh! (metal branch falls off a tree) Well, |I'm just getting fed up with all of this nonsence (looks at a clockwork butterfly)
when she goes for a walk she sees a clockwork dog.She goes to the inventor's factory and in amazement she sees lots of clockwork inventions.She got the feeling that the inventor doesn't love her any more.She takes a quiet walk through a park when she decides to sit on the bench for a while.Suddenly a branch craks a little so she shakes it a little bit.Then she saw a butterfly which surprised her for some reason.Then the inventor saw that the rose was dead so he threw it out and replaced it with a clockwork flower.And when the girl came back she was really surprised to find it there with the inventor next to it.She ran downstairs when she lost her hat and she fond out that the flower was dead.She blew of the dust and coughed right then she died.Then another person came to comfort the inventor but he was so sad that he bloke everything that he made.He sat in the darkness and picked up the dead rose looked at it.He was sad for the rest of his life until one day he made a clockwork women that he didn't like.
The Piano There is this grandfather that has a flashback of when he was young first his wife was sitting next to him then it faded away.After that he was at war when his friend died because he got shot.Then one when his was riding on a horse that he gave to his grandson.
For the film 'The Piano' If I had to add the speech I would add it from when the man that plays the piano would be talking to him self in his mind. He would talk while the music would play. When the grandma or I could say his wife (the old lady) comes he could say this (in his mind) : " I remember my wife when we used to play this song. I started playing and then she always joined me. Sadly she is not with me now........... And why dos life need to be that sad!!! When I was a soldier I had my best friend and he always had to shoot. One day when he was standing at the wall I said that he should shoot now, but that was a bad idea they had....... he had....... been shot. Life is sad, but there are also happy and jolly things in it. I remember when I got the wooden horse that was big as me. I gave it to my grandson." The boy comes in and grandpa talks out loud " Hello! You've got my horse! How do you do? " he plays the second last note of the song with his grandson playing the last one. Marketa
The Piano Grandpa:How I wish my wife was alive. The grandpa was very sad because his wife died.He remembered how he and is wife played the piano together. Grandpa:Life was so joyful back in those days but now life is heartbroken. He imagined his wife next to him. He loved playing the piano because he remembered his wife. It made him sorrowful. Grandpa:Even my best friend died!!! The grandpa and his friend were in the army back then (when his friend died) he and his friend were leaning against a wall their enemies were on the other side of the wall. Grandpa:I don't know why I told him to shoot when it wasn't the correct time. The enemies shot his friend instead of him shooting the enemies. At least there are a few happy things. Grandpa:Oh grandson how are you, I see you have got my old toy horse. Grandson:I love this horse, it is a super toy. Grandpa: Lets play the last not of this song together.
When the man was playing on the piano he just thought back to a very fascinating moment, that his wife was playing the piano beside him. then another memory how the soldiers murderd his friends. He just loved to play on the piano, that made him think of a memory
Invention of Love Lady: I can't believe that everything in this land is mechanical. The lady is in a land of inventions. Lady:Oh look at that dog!!! Lady:Why is the dog mechanical too??? I don't understand!!! There is a lot of pollution in the land. The lady coughs. Lady:Let me go and sit down. She sees a flying creature on a flower.... a butterfly which is also mechanical!!! Lady I am getting fed up is there anything in this land which is not mechanical except my rose??? Inventor: I don't like this rose it is not mechanical. He throws his wife's rose out of the window. And he replaces it with a mechanical flower. Lady:Why did you throw away the rose??? Lady: I am going to look for the rose. The lady coughs so much that she dies. Samyukta
narrator :Firstly the man starts of with playing then he sees her wife but in fake. Man:Oh I wish you were here with me. narrator:then he plays the piano on and on.In a while he flashbacks of when he was a solider nurse and when his best friend died. Man:You really were my best fiend and I will kill the man who killed you. Narrator: Then he realizes that he is playing the piano.In a moment his grandchild came and he gave him a horse toy and in that time the man plays a tip toe melodie. Grandchild:Yuuuuupppppppeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Narrator :Then they both play and they end it with a nice tune + with a really big smile. By:Aika
Grandad: I always remember sad things when i play this music. I remember things like my wife playing this piano with me. I also remember the awfull second world war, when my friend got shot and died. However I also think about good moments in my life. Ithink aboutmy first wooden horse. Which i gave to my grandson. This music really joins generation
The woman went to the city to look around.Suddenly, she understood that everything is made out of metal.She felt so vile so she sat on a bench.Then she saw a butterfly and she came closer to it and realised that it is a metal one as well.So she ran as fast as she could to her house.Then the man changed the flower to a robot flower.She was so shocked that she ran away and died!The man wanted to reapeat his love so he made a robot wife. Machines can't replace love!
This is my thoughts on when and where should be put in. The invention of love.
ReplyDelete" She enters the garden centre, nothing living, everything mechanical she is really surprised as were she came from almost everything was alive. She sat on a bench but something very surprising happened (perhaps for her but not for everyone else as they are use to it) a small branch almost fell of, she thought why on earth did nothing else fall off? It was a mechanical tree, she then ran back to her lovely husband but another surprise awaited her. To her dismay when she came home that his husband had thrown away the rose and replaced it with a mechanical flower she raced down to find the rose and find she did but when she blew the dust off her illness came to her and sadly she died. The man was distraught to hear the news when the doctor confirmed that she had died, He threw the mechanical rose away and thrashed his inventions on to the wall so the broke and was sad for the rest of his life but then one day he mad a woman who wasn't anywhere near as good as his previous wife and was sad again.
The piano with narration
ReplyDeleteThe man sitting and playing on his piano has a flashback and a very sad one at that. His wife comes ( in his flashback, obviously ) whilst they are both playing on the piano. His best friend and him are in the war now and unfortunately his best friend dies and he tries and tries again to fix him but it is no use. He gets a horse and rides on it and he gives it as a present to his grandson and his grandson then comes and plays with his grandfather and then it is the end.
For the film called ' Invention of love ' from the scene where the woman goes to the town, I would add some speech,but not a lot. The woman could maybe sing,while going there. When there is the part where she sees the dog she could say something like " Come here doggie. Look I have some thing for you." when the clockwise dog comes out she could make some surprised noises. When she still goes in the city she is very quiet,but she coughs. When she comes to the park she says " Yes finally I found the park. I am going for a walk to stop thinking about this." she sites down on the bench and suddenly the branch breaks. "Oh no! What had happened?" she says and tries to lift it up but then she realizes that it is mechanical to. " This is all just a bad dream! Just a bad dream!!!" she yells and runs home. When the man sees that the rose is dead or dried he asks the rose "What had happened? Oh we don't need a dead rose at home it makes us sad. Sorry bye." and drops it out of the window. When the lady sees the mechanical rose she starts crying and runs down the stares.She sits next to the rose and says. "No please no." and she start coughing. " Bye bye." she says and these are her last words. When the doctor comes he says " I am sorry for you."
ReplyDeleteMarketa
INVENTION OF LOVE
ReplyDeleteAs the women realises the flower was throw out the
window she dashes down the stairs losing her hat and searches through the dump of rubish...
Then she finds it and blowes the dust off it she starts coughing and DIES!
THE PIANO
ReplyDeleteAs he goes to help his friend in battle ,with his medic bag and uniform, he stands side by side with his friend. Then the medics friend jumps in to battle and get shot down DEAD!!!
Invention of Love :
ReplyDeletewife:Wow the air is so fresh.
narrator: then she saw the mechnical dog.
wife: oh what did the people do to you poor thing.
wife :oh what happend to you flowers.
narrator: she was so sad. Then she saw the butterfly that was also mechanical and she was even more unhappier.
wife: oohhhh who could've done this to you?
narrator: Meanwhile she was out the man thougt that it is stupid to have living things.
man: Let me throw the rose away and make a mechanical one.
narrator:The woman comes and says.........
wife: It was horrible out there atleast it's better out here.Oh my god..............!!!!!!!!
wife :who threw my rose away.
man:I did
wife :what!!!!!!!!!!!
narrator:she ran to get it but when she found it she did a big cough and colapsed.so then the man took her to the doctor and he said......
doctor:I am so sorry to say this but your wife is dead.
narrator:In a while the man went home with anger and sadness.
man:I knew I should've made sure she won't cough.
narrator: However he came up with a idea that he will make a mechanical lady and that was the end.
By:Aika
I believe that in the piano this would be my dialouge in a script:
ReplyDeleteOld Man: Why did my wife have to die...
Dead Wife: Hello gorgious... (fades away)
Old Man: And why did those eveil soldiers slaughter my best friend...
Younger Old Man: Attack... NOW!
Best Friend: Charge!
Younger Old Man: NO! (sees best friend being shot)
Old Man: But I musn't think of my life as a bad life... getting my toy horse as a little boy...
Mum: Now, Here is your present...
Little Boy Old Man: Thank you so much (unwrapping a wooden box)
Old Man's Grandson: Hello Granpa.
Old Man: Hello Grandson...
This is what I believe should be the dialouge for the invension of love, where she goe on a walk.
Woman: Goodbye, Darling.
Inventer: Bye.
Woman: My gosh, what a busy place.
Clockwork Dog: Bark, Bark!
Woman: Come here little doggy, come... (dog steps forward and reviels tat it is clockwork, woman ghasp's) Well, this isn't such a jolly place after all... (sits down on a bench)Oh! (metal branch falls off a tree) Well, |I'm just getting fed up with all of this nonsence (looks at a clockwork butterfly)
Invention of love
ReplyDeletewhen she goes for a walk she sees a clockwork dog.She goes to the inventor's factory and in amazement she sees lots of clockwork
inventions.She got the feeling that the inventor doesn't love her any more.She takes a quiet walk through a park when she decides to sit on the bench for a while.Suddenly a branch craks a little so she shakes it a little bit.Then she saw a butterfly which surprised her for some reason.Then the inventor saw that the rose was dead so he threw it out and replaced it with a clockwork flower.And when the girl came back she was really surprised to find it there with the inventor next to it.She ran downstairs when she lost her hat and she fond out that the flower was dead.She blew of the dust and coughed right then she died.Then another person came to comfort the inventor but he was so sad that he bloke everything that he made.He sat in the darkness and picked up the dead rose looked at it.He was sad for the rest of his life until one day he made a clockwork women that he didn't like.
The Piano
ReplyDeleteThere is this grandfather that has a flashback of when he was young
first his wife was sitting next to him then it faded away.After that he was at war when his friend died because he got shot.Then one when his was riding on a horse that he gave to his grandson.
For the film 'The Piano' If I had to add the speech I would add it from when the man that plays the piano would be talking to him self in his mind. He would talk while the music would play. When the grandma or I could say his wife (the old lady) comes he could say this (in his mind) : " I remember my wife when we used to play this song. I started playing and then she always joined me. Sadly she is not with me now........... And why dos life need to be that sad!!! When I was a soldier I had my best friend and he always had to shoot. One day when he was standing at the wall I said that he should shoot now, but that was a bad idea they had....... he had....... been shot. Life is sad, but there are also happy and jolly things in it. I remember when I got the wooden horse that was big as me. I gave it to my grandson." The boy comes in and grandpa talks out loud " Hello! You've got my horse! How do you do? " he plays the second last note of the song with his grandson playing the last one.
ReplyDeleteMarketa
The Piano
ReplyDeleteGrandpa:How I wish my wife was alive.
The grandpa was very sad because his wife died.He remembered how he and is wife played the piano together.
Grandpa:Life was so joyful back in those days but now life is heartbroken.
He imagined his wife next to him. He loved playing the piano because he remembered his wife. It made him sorrowful.
Grandpa:Even my best friend died!!!
The grandpa and his friend were in the army back then (when his friend died) he and his friend were leaning against a wall their enemies were on the other side of the wall.
Grandpa:I don't know why I told him to shoot when it wasn't the correct time.
The enemies shot his friend instead of him shooting the enemies.
At least there are a few happy things.
Grandpa:Oh grandson how are you, I see you have got my old toy horse.
Grandson:I love this horse, it is a super toy.
Grandpa: Lets play the last not of this song together.
Piano
ReplyDeleteWhen the man was playing on the piano he just thought back to a very fascinating moment, that his wife was playing the piano beside him. then another memory how the soldiers murderd his friends.
He just loved to play on the piano, that made him think of a memory
For the film invention of love'
ReplyDeleteWife: what a pretty dog good natured dog
Wife : aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
Wife : thats a meccchanic doooog.
Wife: I am getting fed up with this why is everything mechanic????!!!!!!
Man : My wife will love this flower, she will like it more than the normal half dead flower.
Wife: were is my flower?
Wife: is that mechanic?
Wife: thats just enough aim getting out to found the flower.
Man: OOOOps not the best idea from me ever!
Wife: cough cough coughe my floweeeer khhhh
Doktor: wooo it looks like she had horrible illness.
Man : emmm soo !!!
Doktor : So shes basically dead.
Doktor : I am very sorry
Invention of Love
ReplyDeleteLady: I can't believe that everything in this land is mechanical.
The lady is in a land of inventions.
Lady:Oh look at that dog!!!
Lady:Why is the dog mechanical too??? I don't understand!!!
There is a lot of pollution in the land. The lady coughs.
Lady:Let me go and sit down.
She sees a flying creature on a flower.... a butterfly which is also mechanical!!!
Lady I am getting fed up is there anything in this land which is not mechanical except my rose???
Inventor: I don't like this rose it is not mechanical.
He throws his wife's rose out of the window. And he replaces it with a mechanical flower.
Lady:Why did you throw away the rose???
Lady: I am going to look for the rose.
The lady coughs so much that she dies.
Samyukta
The Piano:
ReplyDeletenarrator :Firstly the man starts of with playing then he sees her wife but in fake.
Man:Oh I wish you were here with me.
narrator:then he plays the piano on and on.In a while he flashbacks of when he was a solider nurse and when his best friend died.
Man:You really were my best fiend and I will kill the man who killed you.
Narrator: Then he realizes that he is playing the piano.In a moment his grandchild came and he gave him a horse toy and in that time the man plays a tip toe melodie.
Grandchild:Yuuuuupppppppeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Narrator :Then they both play and they end it with a nice tune + with a really big smile.
By:Aika
Grandad: I always remember sad things when i play this music. I remember things like my wife playing this piano with me. I also remember the awfull second world war, when my friend got shot and died. However I also think about good moments in my life. Ithink aboutmy first wooden horse. Which i gave to my grandson. This music really joins generation
ReplyDeleteThe woman went to the city to look around.Suddenly, she understood that everything is made out of metal.She felt so vile so she sat on a bench.Then she saw a butterfly and she came closer to it and realised that it is a metal one as well.So she ran as fast as she could to her house.Then the man changed the flower to a robot flower.She was so shocked that she ran away and died!The man wanted to reapeat his love so he made a robot wife.
ReplyDeleteMachines can't replace love!