Thursday 1 March 2012

Past, Present and Future sentences

Hello Big Writing group,

Your homework this week is to write 3 sentences for each picture, 1 sentence to say what has happened, 1 saying what is happening and 1 saying what will happen (past, present, future). Your sentences should obviously be complex sentences full of WOW words, bonus points will be awarded for original, imaginative and funny sentences.

By Mr Bennett


Picture 1

Picture 2

Picture 3

Picture 4

Picture 5

Picture 6

10 comments:

  1. picture 1:I think that the police man was having tea with the two abominable people.

    I think that the police man is telling jokes to the tow people in stupendous cloth.

    I think the police man is going to run proudly around naked.

    picture 2: I think the kids where teleported from another universe.

    I think that the kids are drinking wine from the bottles in there hands.

    I think the kids are going to fight like little babies.

    picture 3:I think the girls dad gave the girl a bottle of rum.

    I think that the girl is drinking the horrid bottle.
    girl
    I think that the girl is going to jump into the crowd.

    picture 4: I think that the cow kicked the people into the river.

    I think that the person in the white t shirt and a tie is just about to jump on the cow.

    I think the cow is going to jump on the people.

    picture 5:I think that the person in the bed was going to run away.

    I think that the person with the hat is erecting the person next to him.

    I think that the person in the bed is going to take a gun that is under his pillow and he is going to shoot the people around him.

    frank

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  2. I think on picture 4 the cow is trying to run away from the people.

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  3. I think on picture 5 the guy is trying to catch the bad guy.

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  4. Pic 1: I think that the police man stoped a daft man from jumping of a collosal victorian building standing in the midl of town and comiting a terrible sucied.
    I think that the police man is explaining the whole thing to the smart and very known owner of the collosal bilding telling him to let him on the roof so he could save the daft man.
    I think that the police man will lose the discusion betvine the welthy and smart man and not have even a second to stop the stupid man from killing him self.
    Pic 4: I think that an old aged farmer went to take out his cows and one cow that axidently drank some whisky from her owner fell into the bubbling and quickely flowing river.
    I think that the old farmer is runing for help but triping every minute because he drank to much very alchoholic whisky.
    I think that after about an hour the old farmer will run to his frend in the bub and ask for help puling out something very needed and that the old farmers freinds will take a crane and when they find the cow they will work hard to pick her up but when they do the old farmer will grab something from the net and he will star huging it and he will start saying "Oh my presios littel brown whiskey cork I thought that I would never see you again.
    Pic 5: I think that Ernst Stavro Blofeld was triing to kill a man called Felix Lester the well know cia agent but the best agen named James Bond stoped his evel plan and started fighting with him.
    I think that they are still fighting in a bloody fight using brocken glass as knifes throwing lamps at each other and kicking and boxing.
    I think the fight will end when Felix and James our two strong heros will trow Blofeld out of the hotel window leting him free fall from the ninght floor.
    Pic 6: I think that a extremly rude man is macking very rude graffity right next to the collosal main police station in sentral of England.
    I think that now he was found by the police and now is standing next to the smart juge and explaining the whole story of why he started to write very rude words on the road.
    I think that the juge will tell him that he has to go to rot into the cell for two weeks because of his illegal act.

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  5. Picture 1
    The two men stole some money from bank.
    The policeman is passing.
    They will end up in prison.
    Picture 2
    There were three brothers.
    They are arguing.
    Who will loose, will wash the toilet.
    Picture 3
    There was a Coca-Cola presentation
    A woman is showing us how to drink Coca-Cola properly.
    Because of a large amount of caffein she will never sleep again.¨
    Picture 4
    The farmers wanted to transport the cow across the river.
    They are using a large crane.
    The crane will crack, the cow will fall into the river and farmers will find out that cows can swim at there own.
    Picture 5
    There was an injured man who called the doctor.
    But the doctor is crazy.
    They will call police.
    Picture 6
    There was an activist.
    He is fighting against washing streets regularly.
    He will right on the street: STOP WASHING OUR STREETS! WE WANT TO LIVE IN MESS!

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  6. Picture 2:
    They were having a picnic .
    One of the boys stole the other ones sandwich .
    They finished with a fight .

    Picture 3:
    Some boys were presenting a wonderful star .
    The star came on the humongous stage .
    She finished with a wonderful song !

    Picture 4:
    A cow ate to much as well as she had a saw throat .
    She nearly fell in the river .
    The men had to pull her back up with a crane .

    Picture 5:
    One man hurt his rist .
    He ran as fast as he could to the hospital .
    A doctor rushed to help .

    Picture 6:
    They hated police mans .
    Rote down mean words on the road .
    Went to the police just after .

    Elodie 4B

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  7. Pic 1: I think a lawyer and a murderer were runing to court.
    I think the policeman is greetng them in eventhough he dosent like the murderer
    I think the judge will decide that the murderer should be sent to prison for 1000 years or life, whatever comes last.

    Pic 2: I think some freinds came to do something together.
    I think they are decideing to play a game of flag in the forest behind them.

    Pic 3: I think the two men were getting ready for a advert to show how good their medicene is.
    I think that the crowd are sitting down and the doctors are bringing their first patient some water to clean her throught
    I think their going to give onre patient to much medicen and the patient will geteven more sick

    Pic 4: I think the people are crossing the river by using a boat with there cow but it fell out.
    I think they are calling the policemen while they are fishing the cow out by using a crane.
    I think the cow will reach the groun safley but after the experince it will faint

    Pic 5: I think a policeman went to a building in the midle of the city to cath a wanted crimenal band
    I think then police man is fighting with the one of the crmenals and is trying to tie him up.
    I think one of the other crimenals will draw a gun and shoot the policeman but then ten minuits later loads of policemen will come ad catch the crimenals

    Pic 6: I think a angry man was wrighting some words to a nebour becouse he didnt like him.
    I think the man is finishing of his last word and getting ready to run away.
    I think the neighbour will call the police and they will make him pay a fine.

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  8. Dunja is right! Erik you're very funny.I was laughing.^^

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  9. why is the the girl drinking coca cola in picture 3!
    Why is Erik so funny!!!! By Sharon

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