It was midnight at
hollowing street,
The trees were like a statue,
And the Landlord’s daughter
was sleeping,
As she was sleeping the
Highway Man
Came pacing…., pacing…,
pacing.. with his
horse,
He was pacing like a lion,
Soon Bess woke up from the
horses tapy tamp footsteps,
After when the H.M strolled
to
Landlord’s house he took
Bess,
like he was a burglar,
They ran as if the where
running to save
their life because they
didn’t want her dad to hear ,
Tim the old stupid ostler
was staring
at them and he demanded at
the soldiers
to come to the cafeteria ,
He was jealous as Mr.Boardman,
After the H.M were in the
cafeteria they
Gazed with stress at ………
……………..the soldiers
The soldiers wanted to kill
The H.M ,
After a while the soldiers
killed the H.M,
And Bess was crying
Like her dad was dead
So then they moved to
another place,
As the time she was 24
years she was in love with
The Highway Man.
By:Aika
I think that the second line,'the trees were like a statue' fits the scene perfectly. I also liked the way you said that the H.M. came pacing like a lion. I think you could improve it by using some more similes.
ReplyDeleteBy:Samyukta