The Highwayman came to see
bess
he talked to her and kissed
her
and after a minute he missed
her
He toled her he would come at
afternoon AND tIM THE OSTLER WAS LISTENING
But he didn’t come at noon
he didn’t come at night.
Just after bESS WAS ABOUT THE
GO TO BED TIM ORDERED TO THE SOILDERS
TO GARD THIS PLACE
BECAUSE THE HIGHWAYMAN WAS ON
HIS WAY.
THREE SOILDERS TIED UP BESS
AND MESSED UP HER BEAUTIFUL
DRESS.
SHE WAS SWEATING WITH BLOOD.
THEN SHE SAW THE HIGHWAYMAN,
TRIED TO MOVE BUT THERE WAS NO
WAY OUT
AND THE SOILDERS WERE LAUGHING
ABOUT.
hER FINGER WAS ABLE TO TOUCH
THE TRIGGER.
THEN SHE SAW THE HIGHWAYMAN.
sHE TRIED TO WARN HIM
SOMEHOW
SO SHE PULLED THE TRIGGER AND
KILL HERSELF.
THE HIGHWAYMAN TURNED AROUND
WENT BACK
ON THE MUDDY TRACK.
THE NEXT DAY HE WOKE UP AND A
RICH GUY HIT HIM ON HIS HEAD
WHEN HE WAS STILL IN BED.
HE FORGOT EVERYTHING.
HE wasn’t A HIGHWAYMAN ANYMORE
SO HE BECAME POOR.
By Timi
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I think you did well becauuse your rhymes fit in well and the different ending was funny.
ReplyDeleteYou could improve on putting the text into verses.