New Highwayman
Once in the middle of
the night a Ferrari came driving by,
In that Ferrari was
James Bond looking at the sky,
He came driving-
driving – driving -
by,
He was in a dark deep
forest with high brown trees,
On those trees were
dark green leaves,
The pavements were
chatting while James Bond came driving.
James Bond had a black
suit, a white shirt with a bow tie,
And a nice little
triangle on the top of his head,
A gun down his pants
with little black bullets,
Shining black eyes on the forehead,
With Todd black shoes
he kept driving-
driving – driving –
by,
And he came in his
super-duper fast Ferrari,
The trees swung from
one way to the other,
James Bond knocked on
the grand door but it was closed-
closed – closed –
hard,
He went to the bottom
of the balcony,
Were Sky the Hotel
managers daughter was waiting for money,
There she was James
Bonds honey.
On the parking slots
were they talking,
There John Jawer was
watching while they were walking,
James Bond Said he was
going to bring back some jewels
And went away with all
his tools-
tools – tools – away,
while Sky Blue-eyed
was waiting.
Elodie
Banu: Elodie I loved it! There were a lot of rhyming words and you made it quite funny!But the bit where you wrote "A nice little triangle on top of his head" didn't make sense.
ReplyDeleteI think the ryming words and the characters were good, but there wernt a lot of similes
ReplyDeletegood but still doeesnt similies:C
ReplyDeletegreat 5 star words :D
Great poem Elodie it is really catchy but the ending does not sound right
ReplyDeletethat poem was absuloutly amazing i liked the words you used.but maybe next time you could make it a little shorter.
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