Thursday, 29 November 2012


New Highwayman


The moon was extremely glowy,

And in the eerie forest,

Tintin came riding with his dog snowy,

And they were both absolutely petrified,

 

He had a black and white lethal pistol,

He really had extremely modern jeans,

And in his shoes he had a pricy pistol,

In case something happened he had a whistle,

 

He came riding to a huge sky-scraper,

He did that dangerous thing because,

He had it on the paper,

And there he saw her
 
Viktor

5 comments:

  1. Nice poem I like your words in it well done.

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  2. Banu: You used good describing words and rhyming words but it didn't quite make sense.

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  3. prety good but no metaphors

    riming is great :D

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  4. Viktor good job but petrified means frozen.

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  5. Very nice story great rhyemes good job in describing forest need more rhyemeing words.

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