New Highwayman
The moon was extremely
glowy,
And in the eerie
forest,
Tintin came riding
with his dog snowy,
And they were both
absolutely petrified,
He had a black and
white lethal pistol,
He really had
extremely modern jeans,
And in his shoes he
had a pricy pistol,
In case something
happened he had a whistle,
He came riding to a
huge sky-scraper,
He did that dangerous
thing because,
He had it on the
paper,
And there he saw her
Nice poem I like your words in it well done.
ReplyDeleteBanu: You used good describing words and rhyming words but it didn't quite make sense.
ReplyDeleteprety good but no metaphors
ReplyDeleteriming is great :D
Viktor good job but petrified means frozen.
ReplyDeleteVery nice story great rhyemes good job in describing forest need more rhyemeing words.
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