The moon was a
glimmering ball of light
The wind was a sign of darkness
The road was a vast as
a star bright
And a boy named Tom came in a car to the hotel
He had a white t-shirt
and a black coat
His hair was a mighty
brown and his shoes were black
His trousers were sky
blue plus his eyes too
He parked his sliver
car in the giant old hotel,
And tried to meet
someone new but the place was empty
He rushed through all
the doors
But sadly there was no
one there
On his way out he
found a girl named Emalli
While the taked a boy
named Bob stared
At them while his hair
turned into flames of fire
King Max’s men came
marching to the hotel
And killed the lovely
Emalli
As soon as Tom heard
about this he
Was as mad as an eagle
and tried to kill
The soldiers but
killed himself
But they lived as one
Seljan
Nice discription of the setting it seems really mistirious.
ReplyDeleteI think the wow words were good but it did not ryme at all
ReplyDeleteBanu: You made it sound very interesting and catchy but there weren't a lot of rhyming words.
ReplyDeleteGeat job seljan but you need more rhyeming words.
ReplyDeletegood but your rhymimg should be on the end :D
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