Thursday 22 November 2012

Aika's new Highwayman verses


It was midnight at hollowing street,

The trees were like a statue,

And the Landlord’s daughter was sleeping,

As she was sleeping the Highway Man

Came pacing…., pacing…, pacing.. with his

horse,

 

He was pacing like a lion,

Soon Bess woke up from the

horses tapy tamp footsteps,

After when the H.M strolled to

Landlord’s house he took Bess,

like he was a burglar,

 

 

They ran as if the where running to save

their life because they didn’t want her dad to hear ,

Tim the old stupid ostler was staring

at them and he demanded at the soldiers

to come to the cafeteria ,

He was jealous  as Mr.Boardman,

After the H.M were in the cafeteria they

Gazed with stress at ………

……………..the soldiers

The soldiers wanted to kill

The H.M ,

After a while the soldiers killed the H.M,

And Bess was crying

Like her dad was dead 

So then they moved to another place,

As the time she was 24 years she was in love with

Someone else and forgot about

The Highway Man.

By:Aika

1 comment:

  1. I think that the second line,'the trees were like a statue' fits the scene perfectly. I also liked the way you said that the H.M. came pacing like a lion. I think you could improve it by using some more similes.
    By:Samyukta

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