Thursday 29 November 2012


New Highwayman


The moon was extremely glowy,

And in the eerie forest,

Tintin came riding with his dog snowy,

And they were both absolutely petrified,

 

He had a black and white lethal pistol,

He really had extremely modern jeans,

And in his shoes he had a pricy pistol,

In case something happened he had a whistle,

 

He came riding to a huge sky-scraper,

He did that dangerous thing because,

He had it on the paper,

And there he saw her
 
Viktor

5 comments:

  1. Nice poem I like your words in it well done.

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  2. Banu: You used good describing words and rhyming words but it didn't quite make sense.

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  3. prety good but no metaphors

    riming is great :D

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  4. Viktor good job but petrified means frozen.

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  5. Very nice story great rhyemes good job in describing forest need more rhyemeing words.

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