Thursday 22 November 2012

Timi's new Highwayman verses


The Highwayman came to see bess

he talked to her and kissed her

and after a minute he missed her

He toled her he would come at afternoon AND tIM THE OSTLER WAS LISTENING

But he didn’t come at noon

he didn’t come at night.

Just after bESS WAS ABOUT THE GO TO BED TIM ORDERED TO THE SOILDERS

TO GARD THIS PLACE

BECAUSE THE HIGHWAYMAN WAS ON HIS WAY.

THREE SOILDERS TIED UP BESS

AND MESSED UP HER BEAUTIFUL DRESS.

SHE WAS SWEATING WITH BLOOD.

THEN SHE SAW THE HIGHWAYMAN,

TRIED TO MOVE BUT THERE WAS NO WAY OUT

AND THE SOILDERS WERE LAUGHING ABOUT.

hER FINGER WAS ABLE TO TOUCH THE TRIGGER.

THEN SHE SAW THE HIGHWAYMAN.

sHE TRIED TO WARN HIM SOMEHOW   

SO SHE PULLED THE TRIGGER AND KILL HERSELF.

THE HIGHWAYMAN TURNED AROUND WENT BACK

ON THE MUDDY TRACK.

THE NEXT DAY HE WOKE UP AND A RICH GUY HIT HIM ON HIS HEAD

WHEN HE WAS STILL IN BED.

HE FORGOT EVERYTHING.

HE wasn’t A HIGHWAYMAN ANYMORE
SO HE BECAME POOR.

By Timi
 

1 comment:

  1. I think you did well becauuse your rhymes fit in well and the different ending was funny.
    You could improve on putting the text into verses.

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