Thursday 29 November 2012

The Highwayman

The moon was a glimmering ball of light

 The wind was a sign of darkness

The road was a vast as a star bright

 And a boy named Tom came in a car to the hotel
 

He had a white t-shirt and a black coat

His hair was a mighty brown and his shoes were black

His trousers were sky blue plus his eyes too

 
He parked his sliver car in the giant old hotel,

And tried to meet someone new but the place was empty

He rushed through all the doors

But sadly there was no one there

On his way out he found a girl named Emalli

While the taked a boy named Bob stared

At them while his hair turned into flames of fire

 
King Max’s men came marching  to the hotel

And killed the lovely Emalli

As soon as Tom heard about this he

Was as mad as an eagle and tried to kill

The soldiers but killed himself

But they lived as one

 

Seljan

5 comments:

  1. Nice discription of the setting it seems really mistirious.

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  2. I think the wow words were good but it did not ryme at all

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  3. Banu: You made it sound very interesting and catchy but there weren't a lot of rhyming words.

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  4. Geat job seljan but you need more rhyeming words.

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  5. good but your rhymimg should be on the end :D

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