Thursday 29 November 2012


New Highwayman

 
Once in the middle of the night a Ferrari came driving by,

In that Ferrari was James Bond looking at the sky,

He came driving-

driving – driving - by,

He was in a dark deep forest with high brown trees,

On those trees were dark green leaves,

The pavements were chatting while James Bond came driving.

 

James Bond had a black suit, a white shirt with a bow tie,

And a nice little triangle on the top of his head,

A gun down his pants with little black bullets,

Shining  black eyes on the forehead,

With Todd black shoes he kept driving-

driving – driving – by,

And he came in his super-duper fast Ferrari,

 

The trees swung from one way to the other,

James Bond knocked on the grand door but it was closed-

closed – closed – hard,

He went to the bottom of the balcony,

Were Sky the Hotel managers daughter was waiting for money,

There she was James Bonds honey.

 
On the parking slots were they talking,

There John Jawer was watching while they were walking,

James Bond Said he was going to bring back some jewels

And went away with all his tools-

tools – tools – away,

while Sky Blue-eyed was waiting. 

  

Elodie

5 comments:

  1. Banu: Elodie I loved it! There were a lot of rhyming words and you made it quite funny!But the bit where you wrote "A nice little triangle on top of his head" didn't make sense.

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  2. I think the ryming words and the characters were good, but there wernt a lot of similes

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  3. good but still doeesnt similies:C

    great 5 star words :D

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  4. Great poem Elodie it is really catchy but the ending does not sound right

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  5. that poem was absuloutly amazing i liked the words you used.but maybe next time you could make it a little shorter.

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